I still love you, and it’s not a cliché…(NaBloPoMo Post 23)
When you laid your eyes on me, you saw love.
You told me soon, that I’m your angel from above.
You fell for me, and gave me many a clue.
And then you hoped, I would fall for you too.
We shared special times, as if it was written.
You cared for me, and soon I was smitten.
But that wasn’t enough for you, you told me so.
You said this is love, and you said you know.
Gradually I saw, what you wanted me to realize.
Finding true love, was a pleasant surprise.
I was now yours, you called me your princess.
We were in heaven, it was bliss.
Slowly but surely, I lost myself to you.
My love for you was deep, and it was true.
But one day I woke up, and you were not the same.
You were cold and acrid, I couldn’t see what you became.
You ripped out my heart, and broke it into pieces.
Once you made me smile, now you gave me bruises.
All those extraordinary moments, now mean to you nothing.
Ever since you did this, my heart’s been aching.
You managed to hurt me, but couldn’t manage one thing.
You couldn’t make me bitter, my heart’s still beating.
Beating with the sound of your name, you can’t take that away.
I still love you, and it’s not a cliché.
© Neha Kapoor
“Be yourself; everyone else is already taken.” ~ Oscar Wilde.
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Its just awesome!
thank you
So beautifully written…Infact, straight from the heart [ Iam not using any cliches here].. takes me down memory lane… good job Neha..
Thanks for the kind words
…nicely written…but one suggestion…forget the bastard! he doesn’t deserve a sweet person like u.
lolz… thank you
But that wont be necessary as this poem is a weave of some thoughts, some experiences and some things I have seen people go through. No bastard has been the inspiration
Neha, I simply do not believe that there’s been no person. Reminds me of the intensity of adolescent crushes – and they were painful! Good job. Took me back into the past.
ha! I never said that. But lets just keep that a mystery shall we?
Actually I have this uncanny knack of churning up melancholic, sappy poems/songs.
The rhyme was good, but the same old thing in a new package.
Ah is it. Well hope you liked the package though
that’s written very well!! it’s only when u are down and out in love that you can think of such poems!
a few of my composed poems:
http://blog.niravthakker.com/category/ishq/
http://blog.niravthakker.com/category/mohabbat/
http://blog.niravthakker.com/category/love/
a few are tagged and repeating in multiple categories.
extremely awesome dear
hmm kiske liye likha hai ? hmm u write so good
btw i agree to ritu totally
keep up good work ..
Rach, Ritu and Nirav,
When a poet writes about flowers that smile, about meeting God or about clouds that beckon, it is not necessary that (s)he has seen such things. Yes, our experiences in life do inspire us, but we can take bits from our own lives and from others and from imagination too. Poetry is free and flowing… that’s the beauty of it. You can pen down the known, and carve the unseen thoughts too…
Thank you for your wonderful comments.
Neha,
Well written. As you mentioned poetry is free and flowing. Many incidents in life inspire us to write. The verses reflect love and pain. Sometime we search for answers. It would be nice if life was like a logarithmic equation, with every turn of thought you find a way to find an answer and in that you will never get lost because everything will eventually equal. Keep writing.
If life was like a logarithmic equation, it would be as boring as logarithmic equations
Thanks for the comment
Nice poem
Usually I don’t read anything for the second time. It was unusual for me this time.
thank you for the kind words
lovely..like someone commented..you cant write it that well unless you have experienced it
True in a way
Nice one.
How about writing something that might give the reason(s) why the guy changed?
I would like to hear the other perspective.
Well go and find the person from the poem and ask. lol.
and Rajat, sometimes there is no answer regarding why someone changed. Maybe they didnt change at all. Maybe you couldnt quite see who they really are.
Hey Neha,
Im not a writer, definitely not a poet; but i like to read good, well-written pieces. You have a nice way of putting down your thoughts. Look forward to some good posts…
congratulations on being the featured article..
you surely desrved it..
hugs,
xoxo
shraddha
nice one dear , u must have been in love to write such poem , it reminds me of taylor swift love story song
hey..dat was just awsome.. words ceep buried in everyone’s heart..!!!
n a girl esp can feel the pain..!!
really enchanting..!!
keep smiling!! PEACE>>!!!!
Well unfortunately that’s how men are. Once it’s over they feel nothing and you know you can’t change it. so stop yourself from feeling anything!
Nice poem otherwise
I was going to write a similar blog concerning this topic, you beat me to it. You did a nice job!
Neha… this is really deep. glad i stumbled here
I want to start my own blog now
I liked your blog a lot.
You know there are times when a few of us feel exactly like the way you mentioned. Just cant put a finger on why people change out of blue. Ah! such is life i guess. Nice poem…and nice to know that there is no bitterness.
such a beauty! well written Neha!
oh well… if i were you i would have let go…
wow…too good…!!
Another Fantastic blog post, I will be sure to save this post in my Digg account. Have a awesome evening.
Very well written!
it hurts to see every next person going through the same pain..