बाहें पकड़ के रोक लेते तुझे
2009 July 9
बाहें पकड़ के रोक लेते तुझे,
अगर ज़ोर हमारा चलता.
ज़िंदगी तुम्हारे नाम क्यों करते,
अगर प्यार इतना ना होता…
© Neha Kapoor
“Be yourself; everyone else is already taken.” ~ Oscar Wilde.
Help the cause against blog plagiarism. Please do not copy.
nice lines….
बाहें पकड़ कर देखा तो होता
हम भी कहाँ जाना चाहते थे
एक बार प्यार से नाम तो लेते
हम भी बस रुकने का बहाना चाहते थे
wow!! Thanks for this
And welcome to my space
wow, wheres the complete one?
Well, this is what was running in my mind at that time so posted it
And doesnt it sound complete? Some things are better said in a few lines I guess
i tagged you
Will do
beautiful lines!!!
Thank you Prats
Beautiful!
Thanks Solilo!
You made this up yourself ???? Wowww !!!
yeah vimmuuu I did
Hey Nice one! Simple but unique and lovely!
Thank you Neilina. and welcome to my blog
WAAH WAAH.. !!
Shukriya!
woah! awesome!!
seedhi dil se nikli aawaaz hai ye to!
kya baat hai!
shukriya ji shukriya
takat badhane ke liye gym ka rasta kijiye.. !!
I was wondering for a loooong time what you meant.
I get it now… hehehe
good stuff….original composition?
Cheers
Brandfizz
http://brandfizz.wordpress.com/
Of course! No copied stuff on my blog
Lines are good…if they are fresh and not copied from anywhere then i have a question. Why you have mentioned that you are a software engineer
you are damn good poet… nurture this talent…
Keep the creative bone tingling and post new things
Well, it is of course mine and not copied
Otherwise I would not have put the “do not copy” disclaimer below it…hehe 
And thank you so much for the compliment
i kind of liked those lines though don’t know nething about poetry… hope girls whom i know they don’t land up on ur page… am gonna use these lines.. will update u if they work
hope i can use it… no copyright breach in this
Well, there is much better poetry out there to impress girls !
Try some famous poet 
but if you use mine and you get the girl, dont forget to thank me 
he he lolz !!! you never know what in there… will see if i get one
nice one … kavyitri Neha ..
wonderful…i m using it as status on orkut..i hope u dnt mind
Well,that amounts to plagiarism.
If you want to use it, then pls give link to this page.
See you have created some good lines.. people are tend to use it, not plagiarism sort of !!! if i use some lines which are famous but i don’t know who has written then am I intended to plagiarism.. i can say okay i have read somewhere… someone has written.. nice lines !!!!
As long as anyone doesn’t claim some lines to be their own
nice! kaun hai vo
ive started to like hindi poetry more and more lately. here are a couple i was simply bowled over…(writing from my bad memory)
tu rail si guzri,
mai pul sa thartharaya
and
ye tera noor hai jo mere chehre par chamakta hai,
nahi to humein kaun poochta hai in andheron mein
the 2nd one is beautiful!
Neha. I can’t read hindi.
aww badz… You can understand Hindi na? Will send you the English version
Awww….. How sweet.
बहुत प्यारी पंक्तियाँ लिखी हैं आपने
dhanywawaad!
awesome!
thanks sweetie
Kya baat hai..bahot khoob !
thankoo!!
Nice lines…
thanks puneet
This is U @ yr Best…. LOL!
thanks beepee! long time no see !!
good indeed
thanks
its the same i narrated on phone few months back .. u posted it here .. good one !!
You sure the call was connected? or were you again talking to yourself? After reading the sher here?
koi na hota hai hota hai…
truely said Miss…