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Pitter patter goes the rain…

September 4, 2009


Pitter patter goes the rain,

Here to wash away the pain.

The sound of rain is serene,

I’m sure outside it’s a marvelous scene.

But I’d rather stay in bed,

For the rain reminds me,

Of your hands.

Gentle yet strong.

© Neha Kapoor
“Be yourself; everyone else is already taken.” ~ Oscar Wilde.
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  1. SiMbA tAgO permalink
    September 5, 2009 4:35 am

    hey excellent and simple poem.. so sober..

  2. September 5, 2009 6:07 am

    Love your poems, Neha.

  3. September 5, 2009 6:16 am

    Very nice and short poem.
    How do some of you get so much talent????

  4. September 5, 2009 6:59 am

    ummmmmmmm thats goooooood…

    really good

  5. September 5, 2009 7:01 am

    nice rhyme :)

  6. September 5, 2009 8:03 am

    Beautiful!!!

  7. September 5, 2009 12:58 pm

    Your still in bed ??? You sick ??? I knew it, because of the rain, na? Get well soon.
    :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D

  8. September 5, 2009 6:11 pm

    fantastic!!

  9. September 6, 2009 8:14 am

    nice one … short simple sweet !

  10. September 6, 2009 8:23 am

    lovely!!! :D

    loved this poem, just like the rest!! short and impactful! :D

  11. September 6, 2009 8:24 am

    and i like the new theme and colour tooooooo!!!!!

    FRESH!!! :D

    hugs!!!

  12. September 6, 2009 5:04 pm

    Bhery bhery naaice!! :D cute poem

    Regards
    Abhishek :D

  13. September 6, 2009 7:32 pm

    Nicely done. Keep it up :0)

  14. September 7, 2009 5:58 am

    awesome, great lines…

  15. September 7, 2009 6:49 am

    Haila! Romantac…

  16. September 8, 2009 9:07 am

    Rain Rain Go away
    Come again another day
    Little wants to play
    Rain Rain go away!

    © Suji!
    “Be yourself; everyone else is already taken.” ~ Oscar Wilde.
    Help the cause against blog plagiarism. Please do not copy.
    :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D

  17. September 8, 2009 9:16 am

    This is a first time visit.. Nice page :)

    I love rains , posts on rains, poems on rains & talks about rains !! ;) That was a sweet romantic poem.

  18. September 10, 2009 3:58 am

    How lovely was that !

  19. LVISS permalink
    September 10, 2009 2:24 pm

    I AM REMINDED OF THE RAIN IN SPAIN.

  20. September 12, 2009 5:06 am

    Rain and Romance !! a perfect combo …. nice poem …

  21. September 12, 2009 8:08 am

    subtle emotion.well captured !

  22. September 15, 2009 1:32 pm

    Oye! Sept 13 ho gaya!!!! we want result update! :D

  23. September 18, 2009 10:07 pm

    The imagery here was incredible. I could feel the pitter patter of the drops, I swear! Loved it.

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