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You would never know, What you mean to me.

February 24, 2010

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You would never know,

What you mean to me.

Neither did I,

Until the day it struck me.

Every time you smiled,

Especially when you smiled at me.

My heart fluttered,

You brought happiness to me.

That day when you were hurt,

You had called me.

I felt so helpless,

I knew you needed me.

I put up a brave voice,

When you spoke to me.

But my heart wept,

It betrayed me.

You had hurt your eye,

You were telling me.

The pain of your wound,

Oh how it lashed at me.

That day I saw again,

What you mean to me.

You would never know,

What you mean to me…

Although every poem is written from the heart, and this one in fact has a piece of my heart, now I’ll be trying different things with poetry. In this one, as you can notice, each line ends with the same word “me”. I’ll also be doing poems which have every line beginning with same word, next line beginning with last word of the previous line, a new poem starting with the last line of the previous poem, and other such experiments. Do watch out for them :)

Update: I didn’t realize, that this was my 100th post! :D

44 Comments leave one →
  1. February 24, 2010 10:00 am

    Okay…just go n tell what it to this person…how much he/she means to you…will ya?

  2. February 24, 2010 10:04 am

    its really from heart…………

  3. February 24, 2010 10:17 am

    This reminds me of something…

    wen u wait 4 sumone 4 few mins…its Need.
    4 few hours…its Trust.
    4 few weeks…its Friendship.
    but wen u r not even sure that da person wil not cum or not and You still wait….its Love..!

    True Love is.. Being there with You all da Time,no matter what!

    n Luks like, Neha is Lucky on that ! (-:

    Lage Raho…

  4. February 24, 2010 10:24 am

    Awesome poem! Read it thrice before i am leaving a comment here and posting this comment in a hurry as i have to read it again! Wow! i can sense that it is straight from heart.

    Keep posting! Will be glad to read more from you.

    Cheers
    Sanjay

  5. February 24, 2010 10:36 am

    A cry from the heart. Really moving

  6. mimi permalink
    February 24, 2010 11:42 am

    i hope ‘he’ reads this…and wakes up….can literally feel what you feel… *big hug*

  7. Ranu Gontia permalink
    February 24, 2010 12:26 pm

    Awesome!!! touched my heart !!!

  8. February 24, 2010 12:59 pm

    Who is it?

  9. February 24, 2010 4:18 pm

    Wow.. awesome poem! :) Kick him and move on! ;)
    Love the picture too !!! :)

  10. February 24, 2010 4:21 pm

    God bless the special one ! :)

    will look out for more to follow : D

  11. February 24, 2010 8:32 pm

    serene and sublime….

  12. February 24, 2010 8:57 pm

    Is that the piece of heart in the pic you mentioned in the writeup after the poem ??? :D :D :D

  13. February 24, 2010 10:58 pm

    :)

  14. February 25, 2010 8:10 am

    Very touching and very rare to read a poem which ends with the same word.

  15. February 25, 2010 8:26 am

    Really awesome poem….i’m really impressed with ur creativity.

  16. vinay permalink
    February 25, 2010 8:53 am

    Nice poem … :)
    congratsssssss for your 100th post :D

  17. February 25, 2010 10:54 am

    Simply beautiful. Period.

  18. February 26, 2010 2:25 am

    Isn’t it always this way that we can never always express whata person would mean to me? I mean, we born, grow-up and die but for oneself, he remains the same but for others he might be Sachin Tendulkar/Mukesh Ambani/Amitabh Bachhan. But for Amitabh Bachhan, he has always been amitabh bachhan.
    May be my comments is little out-of-context but i like the idea of trying different things, which you talked about in last.
    A nice and good poem. Thanks for it!
    -Amit

  19. Anshul permalink
    February 26, 2010 5:46 pm

    Hey…………..

    nice poem btw,

    really liked it………………..

    Good work …………. keep it up!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  20. Aditi.. permalink
    February 28, 2010 4:26 am

    Awesome Neha….!!! Keep Posting!!

  21. March 1, 2010 8:57 am

    A very beautiful poem….I feel you deserve the beautiful blogger award. Visit today’s post…
    http://neha-liveratherthanexist.blogspot.com/

    Smile always!

    Love
    Neha

  22. March 2, 2010 10:15 am

    lovely poem and congrats on 100 posts :) at least you are keeping a track. will wait for your experiments

  23. March 2, 2010 4:23 pm

    congrats on completing 100 posts.. :) the poem is indeed heart felt..very well written.

  24. March 3, 2010 12:50 pm

    really a nice one!
    keep it up…

  25. March 4, 2010 7:28 am

    Nice one.

  26. March 6, 2010 7:29 am

    Nice poem and nice blog.

  27. nilesh permalink
    March 13, 2010 8:49 am

    Love means the warmth of the sun,the aroma of a rose,the breeze of the sea,but as you can see it never means the same for anyone.Love acquires its true meaning by exp…

  28. April 6, 2010 9:01 am

    tagging you .. do visit my blog. lovely poems. I just came back to read again love ya

  29. June 14, 2010 10:26 am

    congrats on the 100th blog post!
    And i can surely relate to this poem.. one can feel it coming straight from the heart..
    (:

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