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He could never really tell where he lost her.

March 1, 2012

As he read old letters from her, he couldn’t help but wonder where he lost her. Perhaps on that road where he left her walking all alone because they ended up fighting while shopping for him. Perhaps on that staircase where she received that call from the girl he was cheating on her with. Or perhaps on the floor of her bathroom, where lay the used pregnancy test showing a negative. He could never really tell where he lost her.

3 Comments leave one →
  1. March 1, 2012 8:46 pm

    Whoa!
    I love nd really envy people whose short write ups are so powerful. I haven’t been able to do that yet.
    Loved this post. Wow!
    x

  2. vinay pande permalink
    March 2, 2012 7:55 am

    excellent … short and nice :)

  3. Dheeraj permalink
    March 2, 2012 11:56 am

    was good to read but could not relate it to myself except for the first point..

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